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For Him..On the lawn of his house,  A boy swears his love,  He promises to be there forever,  To always protect her;  The girl wrapped in his arms.   
He pledges to love her forever,  And to never let her feel cold.  A single tear rolls down her cheek,  This is all she’s ever wanted,  And now she has to say goodbye.   
She’s dreamed of this,  All her life she’s waited for him,  And now he’s saying goodbye.  He’s leaving her,  Cold, lost in the rain.   
As she drives away,  He watches her fade to nothing,  Wishing they could have just one more moment, &n For Him..
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Dust in the WindI like to think you’re out there,  Watching over me,  Protecting me.   
But I know in my heart,  That you’re forever gone,  Carried away by dust in the wind.   
I like to think you’ll always be here,  Sheltering me from the cold,  Making sure I’m always warm.   
But I in my head I know  That life will always be bitter without you  I'm trembling, lost in the snow.   
I like to think you’re always in the next room,  Listening should anything go wrong,  In case I’m at all scared.   
But within my body I know  That if something were to happen, Dust in the Wind
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A girlOn the wrong side of the road,  A girl waits,  She waits for a boy, gone forever,  She waits for a feeling, long forgotten.   
Silent tears fall down her porcelain cheeks  Leaving streaks of black on perfect white.  The scars from too many lonely nights  Cover her arms, her legs, her neck.  Her body is littered with bruises;  Boyfriends who hurt her,  Parents who didn’t love her.   
A cry escapes her lips,  A look of sadness fills her eyes,   
She stares through the fog,  Looking to the other side,  Hoping to find a friendly face,  The face of someo A girl
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NothingNothing,  Not any more.  I’m empty inside.   
There’s nothing but ashes,  Of what I used to have,  That were burnt to nothing  When I heard of your passing.   
Nothing,  Not any more.  I’m empty inside.   
You filled my world,  You were my everything.  And now I’m left with nothing.  Nothing but a memory,  Of a love I didn’t appreciate.   
Nothing,  Not any more.  I’m empty inside. Nothing
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Holidays!

Thu Jan 5, 2006, 12:19 AM
Evening all,

Hope your holidays went well, and you all ahd a good time. I spent Christmas with my family which was good, just sat around talking, laughing and eating :P And new years was even better, me and three of my mates went down south camping for a week. It was so much fun. We spent the entire time road tripping around the bottom of the south island partying every night, and sleeping all morning :P Met heaps of funny as people on our travels adn made some really good friends :D

Anyway, best be off, I need to get some decent sleep :P

Abi xx
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  • Current Residence: Christchurch, New Zealand
  • Interests: skiing, music, reading, soccer, running, rugby
  • Favourite movie: The Rocky Horror Picture Show
  • Favourite band or musician: The Used, Tool, Slipknot, Him, etc
  • Favourite genre of music: goth-rock, heavy metal
  • Favourite poet or writer: Edgar Allan Poe, Thomas Harris
  • Favourite game: Poker :D
  • Favourite cartoon character: Salad Fingers
  • Personal Quote: I am but one person, therefore I am nothing.
  • Tools of the Trade: Pen, paper and time

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!jessicamadison:iconjessicamadison: Mar 1, 2008, 5:16:35 AM
Wow! You really are a brilliant poet, aren't you?

Why don't you join the poetry contest from [link] ?


It's free and every nitwit such as myself who enters gets a small gift

but someone like you might win one of their $10 000 or $100 000 prizes.
~v3rtex:iconv3rtex: Aug 21, 2005, 11:26:26 PM
Nice work kiwi ;)

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~unnoticeable:iconunnoticeable: Aug 23, 2005, 1:38:44 AM
Thanks :D Where in New Zealand are you from?? xx

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~v3rtex:iconv3rtex: Aug 23, 2005, 2:44:00 AM
Middle South Island, furthur to the west ;)

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~unnoticeable:iconunnoticeable: Aug 24, 2005, 10:12:28 PM
Cool! I'm from Christchucrh so we're not too far away from each other :P

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=mrcool256:iconmrcool256: Aug 7, 2005, 2:22:21 AM
Great poetry, I really loved reading a few of your pieces. Keep up the good work.

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~EternalMoonlight:iconEternalMoonlight: Jul 21, 2005, 6:01:35 AM
you have such an amazing gallery :blowkiss:
I read a few poems, and really want to read all of them whenever I find time to read some more...so I'll keep an eye on you from now on :+devwatch:
~unnoticeable:iconunnoticeable: Jul 22, 2005, 7:59:05 PM
Thanks :thanks: much appreciated :D xx

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