On the lawn of his house,
A boy swears his love,
He promises to be there forever,
To always protect her;
The girl wrapped in his arms.
He pledges to love her forever,
And to never let her feel cold.
A single tear rolls down her cheek,
This is all she’s ever wanted,
And now she has to say goodbye.
She’s dreamed of this,
All her life she’s waited for him,
And now he’s saying goodbye.
He’s leaving her,
Cold, lost in the rain.
As she drives away,
He watches her fade to nothing,
Wishing they could have just one more moment,
One more kiss,
One more I love you…
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interesting, though I don't get it
why are they saying GoodBye?
It feels like in the poem both still love each other, so it makes no sence to me
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